Exodus, by Drew Avera

The background and plot of this story are ridiculous. An official hit is placed on a character who is then allowed to freely walk around the city and take out his enemies as he wishes.

The characters are completely implausible - people behave in ways totally inappropriate to their position or described background.

The action is unbelievable - elements of basic security are so completely ignored or bypassed that there is no credibility.

The grammar, spelling and punctuation are poor for most of the book, and then become quite awful towards the end. It's hard to imagine an author writing stuff in this way, or making some of the mistakes, never mind a proof-reader or editor letting them slip past.

In summary, don't waste your time on this one at all.

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